The poetic form of the old sonnet,
Seems so useless and very out of date
No more do girls wear a fancy bonnet
And such should be iambic poems fate.
This savage poem cuts the brain for meat,
It pierces with sharp rhymes o’r fire to fry.
And dances ‘round to words that fiercely beat,
Until the life has left the page to die.
So throw the worthless prose into the fire
Stoke the flames to make it glow bright and hot
Chant until you’re dizzy with desire
Stab its tiny heart so it will live not.
We wish for death upon restrictive lines,
and forcing fourteen phrases into rhymes.
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This is being posted for Thursday Poets Rally, Week 16
welcome in...
ReplyDeleteplease feel free to visit 12 participants on the list.
I will place your link in now.
Too funny! I write lots of sonnets so do appreciate your using yet abusing the form. I'm here from Jingle's Rally-- welcome!
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Definitely a fun sonnet. Enjoyed that.
ReplyDeletewowo... loved it...
ReplyDeleteit indeed seems to be the death of a sonnet.. with a sonnet :D
I'm here from Jingle's rally
you can check my poem at
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/04/29/thursday-poets-rally-hes-everything-that-i-need/
great job! love it! forget restrictions, just let it flow!
ReplyDeletewoOoOw! awesome :))
ReplyDeletereally nice!
THis was fun to read. You rhymed it very well.
ReplyDeleteGood day!
an enjoyable twist cheers Pete
ReplyDeletewhat a great sonnet! i like it! :) i want to make one too.. but the right poem hasnt come yet..
ReplyDeletei love sonnets... :) your poem has this funy, ironic twist... nicely done!!!
ReplyDeleteoh, the irony ;). Thanks for visiting my blog. I enjoyed your poem
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ReplyDeleteHappy May!
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/02/poetry-awards-for-week-16-thursday-poets-rally/
ReplyDelete2 poetry awards,
2 friendship award...
Happy Sunday!
Happy May!
It's a hard task, but very rewarding when done well. Thanks.
ReplyDeletea lovely sonnet and funny too.well done mam!
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like you have fought this war before. Nice rhyming. I think you did a great job.
ReplyDeleteha. loved that one...
ReplyDeleteplease visit and comment for 12 poets in my fresh poets list...
ReplyDeletemake sure they are new to you...
http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/05/yes-i-can-handle-it.html
my post for the Rally is here.
thanks for reading it.
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/05/thursday-poets-rally-week-17-may-6-12-2010-homecoming/
ReplyDeleteI try to honor previous participants,
you are given three award from the post from me.
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/24/the-celebrate-poet-of-april-award-announcement-and-more/
ReplyDeleteThe Celebrate Poet of April Honorable
Mention Award
plus
two more on the bottom....
Happy Tuesday!
;)