A Brief Moment By The Fire
There was a brief moment
by the fire
when the two women
considered the unthinkable:
They wondered what would happen
if they tore off their constricting
dresses, corsets, underthings,
and tossed them in.
They would find themselves
standing there naked,
free,
watching the warm light
glow with the fabric fuel,
and ashes of their former life
flit up on the rising heat,
only to be stopped
by the ceiling.
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This is my first work for the Poetry Prompt MEME. I hope to keep participating and keep writing poetry.
you know somedays that sounds awfully appealing. smiles.
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This is great! Makes me want to start a fire!! Wonderful xx
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I have a poem posted yesterday, I would love some feedback from you.
Happy Thursday!
Excellent job!